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Tuesday, October 4, 2011

Review of Xondra Day's "Our Dirty Little Secret"

Author: Xondra Day
Title: Our Dirty Little Secret
Length: Novella




Author's Blurb

Ann Hunter is a woman on the edge. She's just turned forty, and while her marriage to her handsome and attentive husband, Jeff, is stellar, she can't help but daydream about the new hunky next-door neighbor, Mike Monroe. Little does she know her husband is experiencing similar feelings but can't bring himself to let them be known, until a secret kiss forces him to face something he has hidden deep inside for years.


Mike never expected this turn of events when he moved into the neighborhood, yet all he can think about is Jeff, the man of his dreams. There is only one problem—Jeff is married.


When an opportunity comes up for an unplanned holiday weekend at the lake, all three are eager to partake. Things happen, secrets are revealed, and boundaries are broken as all three venture into unexplored, forbidden territory.


Note: This book contains double vaginal penetration.


What I Thought
The positive points:

The writing was smooth and even, the overall pacing good. Despite its novella length, Our Dirty Little Secret fully developed the three main characters. Ann, in particular, was believable as the forty-year-old woman whose sexual desires are in overdrive. The sex scenes between Jeff and Ann were descriptive and vivid. The menage scene was sufficiently different from the earlier scenes of M/M and M/F sex to hold interest to the end.

The negative points:
Oddly, for a novella, the most negative aspect of Our Dirty Little Secret was an unnecessary addition concerning Ann's sister's marriage. Despite the clearly intended contrast between Ann's sister's marriage – falling apart due to the husband's cheating – and Ann's, there was insufficient connection to the meat of the story. Either the sister's marriage should have come more to the fore, becoming important to the story, or it should have been cut altogether. As it stands, the whole subplot jars. The other drawback was the suddenness of Ann's change from fury to arousal upon the discovery of her husband with another man. It is a possible reaction, but the description, particularly given Ann's earlier feelings about her sister's adulterous husband, did not do justice to Ann's changing feelings.

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Tuesday, September 20, 2011

Review of Kelly Yeakle's "Forbidden Desires"

Author: Kelly Yeakle
Title: Forbidden Desires
Length: Full




Author's Blurb

When Dani meets the delicate beauty that is Carmen she knows instantly that she wants her—in her life and in her bed. But can Miss. Commitment-phobic look beyond the sex to see the woman beneath?


To Carmen, the wildly beautiful Dani is a new and exciting friend. What she hadn't counted on is the simmering desire she feels when in Dani's presence. As her relationship with her boyfriend sours, Carmen begins to wonder if there is more to Dani than she realizes.


Should she give in to this, the most forbidden of desires?


What I Thought


The positive points:
The romance developed at a pace which I found believable, and the story arc was satisfactory, showing both Dani's growth from a commitment-phobic flirt to a one-woman girl as well as Carmen's realization of her bisexuality. Their physical attraction was displayed from the beginning, and the alternating points of view showed both sides clearly. The ending was fitting, giving Carmen the happily-ever-after she had always longed for and Dani the one she had never known she needed. Both characters were well-developed, and their interactions were believable.


The negative points:
The sex scenes were repetitive, and there was insufficient description of the "naughty things" which Dani fantasized about doing to Carmen. Instead of showing what Dani had in mind, Kelly Yeakle gives only a light gloss of the sex between the two women. In particular, the scene in Carmen's parents' house, where the pair first have sex, ought to have received a more thorough treatment. It was the first time Carmen had had sex with another woman, and the description ended after Carmen was brought to climax for the first time. More description would have helped to explain the change in Carmen between that night and the next morning.

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